我没有逐字翻译,只是注重口语表达和流畅性。所以大家会发现有一些语序和用词上的变化。这一段对话生活气息比较浓厚,感情强烈,比较易于翻译。欢迎讨论。
景天:小葵!
Jingtian:Hey there!
龙葵:啊?不要过来,你出去好不好?好不好……
Longkui:Oh! Just a minute... get out and leave me alone, all right?
景天:对不起,我有话对你说,忘了敲门了,你是不是要歇息了?那明天再说吧,好好休息。
Jingtian: Sorry I didn't knock the door but I wanna talk with you. You are going to bed? So let's make it tomorrow. Have a good rest.
景天:你哭了?
Jigntian: You are crying. Aha?
龙葵:没有……不要管我了,好不好?
Longkui: Oh no. Just give me a break, OK?
景天:你、你为什么收拾行李,你要走吗?
Jingtian: Why are you packing your stuff? Are you leaving?
龙葵:没有……我只是整理一下……
Longkui: No... You know, I'm just tidying them up... OK?
景天:乱讲!你所有的东西都在这里了,还说不是?
Jingtian: Hey, you’ve got everything here! Tidy up? Don’t pulling my leg!
龙葵:是啊……一个鬼带着行李也不像样,会被人笑话的……可是……我舍不得这些……这些你送我的东西。
Longkui: Yeah, I know it looks absolutely funny for a ghost to carry these things... but, you know, I hate to throw your gifts away.
景天:我送你的东西?什么啊?我怎么不记得了?我看看!
Jingtian: What? My gifts? Aha, how can I forget them! Let me see!
景天:唔……我送你的衣服,还有一方手帕……啊?!这个麻糖你怎么还留着!
Jingtian: Well, the dress, the handkerchief, and... My god! You are still saving this candy! Why!
龙葵:不要看!
Longkui: STOP!
景天:小葵!为什么要走呢,我做什么让你不高兴的事了吗?
Jingtian: Why are you leaving, dear? Did I upset you?
龙葵:不是!是我……我做了让你不高兴的事,把雪见姐姐气跑了,徐大哥也在怪我——
Longkui: No! I mean, it's my fault! I bothered you because I annoyed my sis and then Changqing was angry too--
景天:胡说!你什么错也没有,是雪见自己小心眼,你要是因为这个偷偷跑了,我才真的会不高兴的!
Jingtian: That's impossible! You are my good girl... She's just narrow-minded, so don't listen to her. Anyway, I will be really upset if you leave without a word like this!
龙葵:你也会急着到处找我吗?
Longkui: Upset...? For me?
景天:当然!你是我妹妹啊!
Jingtian: Of course! You are my sister!
龙葵:哥哥……我不会偷跑的,你也不要抛下我。我不愿意再回到剑里去,那里好黑,还有好多怨灵,他们说着我听不懂的话,笑话我,没有人关心我,连个说话的人也没有……我不喜欢,我害怕……
Longkui: I WON’T LEAVE!I promise! I really hate to get back in the sword, you know, the dark, horrible place... I was always teased by the demons as I can't understand them, and there's nobody to talk with! Stay with me please! I really like to have you around...
景天:放心!有我在身边,你不用害怕任何东西!我会保护你的!
Jingtian: Hey! Relax! I'm always on your side! Take it easy! All right?
龙葵:嗯……
Longkui:Yeah, I trust you.
景天:不要想那么多了。我去睡了,小葵你也早点睡吧。
Jingtian: Now, come on. I will go to bed. Good night.