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摘要: 刺桐姬小蜂（Quadrastichus eryhrinae Kim）2005年7月在深圳首次发现。2005年8月，农业部、国家林业局和国家质检总局联合发布第538号公告，将刺桐姬小蜂列为中华人民共和国进境植物检疫有害生物和全国林业检疫性有害生物，并采取限制刺桐植物进口和检疫控制措施。因此，深圳市有关部门组织开展了全市范围的刺桐姬小蜂疫情普查和扑灭行动。

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Abstract: Quadrastichus eryhrinae Kim  was found at Shenzhen first time July 2005. 2005 August, Department of Agriculture, nation forestry bureau and nation quality check bureau consociation release No.538 announce, Quadrastichus eryhrinae Kim to list as the People's Republic of China to enter a Jing plant to quarantine harmful living creature and whole country the harmful living creature of the forestry medical inspection, And combine adopt restriction to stab a Tong plant import and quarantine control measure.Therefore, department concerned in the Shenzhen City organization openned an exhibition the whole city Quadrastichus eryhrinae Kim epidemic situation census and put out activity.

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Abstract: Quadrastichus eryhrinae Kim was firstly found in Shenzhen, Guangdong Province, in Jul.2005. In Aug. 2005, Ministry of Agriculture, China Ministry of Forestry, and General Administration of Quality Supervision, co-sponsored No.538 Announcement listing Q. eryhrinae as Quarantine Pests of Entry Plants of P. R. China and National Forestry Quarantine Pests, and adopted importing restriction of Ervthrina orientalis and other quarantine measures. Therefore, Shenzhen related organs organized a general investigation of epidemic situation and eradication of Q. eryhrinae in the whole city.

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