The Fun I had

One day I was walking along the Changan Street when I suddenly caught sight of a telephone Box, which was built with big thick glasses imbedded in a metal frame. Through the glass a telephone was seen clearly on a tiny table inside the box. it was very attractive. “Why don`t I come in and make a phone call? ” I thought. Then I entered the box and put four cents into the slot according to the indications. The wire was put through. So I dialed one of my friend`s numbers and waited for the answer. But only a few sounds were heard. I pushed the small button. The four coins fell out. So I had to put them into the slot a second time. Again I heard nothing but a few sounds instead. “What a waste of time!” I said to myself. I decided not to dial again. I pushed the button. To my surprise, this time 8 cents came out of the machine!
The Fun I had
(Redrafted)
Walking aimlessly along the broad straight Changan Avenue one free afternoon when I suddenly caught sight of a transparently framed modern telephone box, through which was a telephone set on a tiny metal table which was rather attractive either for its color or shape. An idea suddenly occurred to me and then I was called by myself and entered the cabin for a brief visit. The following induction was a mouth like slot to which I slided four cents as the board notice indicated for a trial of a seem-to-be emergent call to a would be friend or whatever whose phone number ready in my mind. The momentary waiting of a few seconds also entertained me a few musical burr-burr buzz that seemed to be enjoyable with the rhythmic heart beat instead of an expectation of an unexpected answer. Reluctantly I imitated the fashionable manner of all street phone makers and pushed the ringing button once again casually but only led the first four coins running out of the slot. So I unwillingly pushed them back into it and dialed a second time. Still no sound but only the programmed noise was heard. Rather annoyed, I fashioned myself again, glancing outside the see-through hut instead of the telephone, and pushed the button dramastically with a finger toe for a silent protest or punishment to the trial. However,the result was not exactly the same but, to my surprise, this time of dialing 8 cents immediately fell out of the silent machine, shining face to face with me without any complains or explanations!
Double trial makes double income.